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July 15, 2009

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Nice one Chloe. If only there was an apostrophe in "peoples", like there should be. Tsk Tsk, indeed.

AAARGH!! there's a typo in people's! If you continue with this design you will force me to graffiti every bottle in the shop in a effort to rectify the situation...

On a pedant bandwagon here, but should the 2 in CO2 be subscript (this box won't let me do it)

open to discussion

second point - should the words 'shake it up' and 'baby' be used in the same sentence? It may be misunderstood by some? Does no-one consider health and safety?

Please change the spelling of peoples to people's! Arghhh

Yes, please change it! It's so big, too, and on the front of the bottle!

surely you mean peoples' not people's. You people!

'People' is already plural. You can't pluralise a plural, so people's it is... You person! :-)

(But please correct the apostrophe, Innocent!)

Chloe here! Just want to say a massive thanks to everyone that voted for my label, I'm so excited about seeing lots of them on the shelves!

And as a fellow pedant, I would also like to reiterate the need to make it "people's"... that bit had nothing to do with me!

C x

Hello there

Don't worry. All apostrophes will be present on the actual label.

The competition template which you can see above was missing one and Ted's had a well clipped ear as a result.

Hahahaha. Brilliant Chloe. Absolutely brilliant.

Lol, nice work there. I'll be looking out for that 'un

Hilarious Chloe, awesome job. I'm working on a label rebrand for my company in Canada, and I know that getting the same feedback over and over before you've had a chance to edit something can drive you batty, so I will refrain from mentioning...that thing that everyone one else already slagged you for. ;-)

Chloe - I hope the joy of winning outweighs all the false accusations of illiteracy. Can't wait to see them!

Kristy, 'people' can be a SINGULAR noun, denoting a nation or a race. Innocent were just trying to show that their drinks are for all nations, and are not solely this nation's.

(Making up excuses for typos is my favourite form of procrastination.)

Doh!

Well done! That's the one I voted for too!

All were good but you summed up the art of label reading!!

The subscript is correct. It is the chemical formula

Well done Chloe - I voted for yours whilst I should have been doing something else, which is what I should be doing right now actually... I hope my boss doesn't read this!

Love from the Queen of Procrastination, and Innocent's biggest fan :)

I VOTED FOR YOU CHLOE!

and thank you everyone - rading about your obsessive grammer worries has brightened up my rather boring ICT lesson!!! all my friends are skiving off the last day of scool at lattitude festival or whatever. i am a loner. bleh.
but you made me smile :)

thanks again!
katex

*goes off to find some game on the internet that our school hasn't blocked...*

oh yh - and i would SO grow a tree inside me! it would be the coolest! i hae another pro: free fruit always in your mouth! :D

Chloe again!
You people are too kind :) And for anyone interested in following my daily procrastinations etc I'm on Twitter!
www.twitter.com/_foxi_

Have a good day :D

C x

Love it! Would make great Tee Shirts too.

My Mum was a nurse (back in the 60s) and she told me a story about a bloke who came in one day with terrible sinus problems.

Turns out... a tomato pip had lodged in the roof of his mouth and a plant had grown up inside his nose!!

I think it was quite painful so maybe one for the cons list.

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